CAUTION:NOT FOR THE FAINT-HEARTED!

What blood would she donate?

When you have already sucked much of it.

Not as a siphon,

But,as a real leech.

You kissed her every time

Only to perceive those nightmarish hickeys,

On her neck and breast

Throwing to it,your signature sardonic smile.

Those hickeys never dried!

Real,red blood grew there as a parasite

Eating off her fragile skin,everyday and every night.

She gasped and moaned

When you devoured like a glutton,

The secretion leaking out of her minuscule belly button,

Contaminating the area with your dirty saliva.

You abused her in every way,

You thought it was out of pleasure that she moaned.

Fool you were,

And blind to the scenes and scenario.

Every cut becoming deeper,

Every sting giving the pain of dissecting her arteries and veins.

You used her agony for an anatomical study.

Blindfolding her every night,

And promising the paradisiacal world of sweet torment and real pleasure,

You used her!

As a living,breathing object;

Ready to be moulded in every possible form or shape.

Reviews

[marcus]

Wow! Powerful!! This is about a murderer and his victim?

[fattycbreezy52]

Umm not actually.This is a kind of abuse on the part of a lover.Anyway,thanks for your kind words:)

[marcus]

That's actually what I thought it was about, but described almost as a murder, awesome!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok first off this may require an adult rating. Otherwise it is a strong and spirited and angry ripost to an abuse of an individual told in very bold and explicit language and descriptions.

[fattycbreezy52]

Do you think I should rate the content as mature?
But, even children below 18 haven't remained children anymore:D

[Chris]

A chilling horror narrative ...well done.

[fattycbreezy52]

Aha! I appreciate. Thanks a lot , Chris:)

[Michael Wright]

Awesome work enjoyed this piece

[fattycbreezy52]

I am glad.Thanks a lot;)