A gyre

A gyre

A Poem by fattycbreezy52


Gaining power,
The gyre of anxiety,
Pulls me more,
1..2...3...
And I am numb!
With an insensate mouth
 a..b...c...
And I am blank!
Even a strong umbrella cannot
Avoid a stubborn vortex,
Everytime.
Every pointed bristle of the crushed leaves
Stinging,
Like a swarm of bees.
Emotions stationary,
Like every passing tree.
Deep in that dungeon
Is my own self,
Undeviating.

© 2015 fattycbreezy52


Author's Note

fattycbreezy52
Thanks for reading
Picture:Iris Scott

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great use of vocabulary here... love the words choices and the description of building anxiety, swirling, twisting around you as you remain constant in your dungeon, separated from the chaos of the world, your world... there is a sense of calm in turmoil in this peace... well-done, FCB

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

and you have grasped my thoughts too damn perfectly here FT.The review made me speechless.Thnaks a l.. read more

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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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