A titbit for myself

Every morning,

She would remember the day,

She had last written,

   For herself.

Because as a poet,

She was too busy.

  "Empathising"

Author's Note

something which speaks about me.Yes,i wrote even a titbit for myself after many years.
Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[Cassie]

Nice, I have never written for myself too, i need to do some thinking and re invent my wheel..good one here girl

[fattycbreezy52]

yes,we are on the same path then,haha,Thanks a lot Cassie:)

[Riya.G30]

The first four lines are so apt. Self evaluation is so important and we often fail to peep into our own inner self. This is a really well written piece. Loved it.

[fattycbreezy52]

absolutely!thanks a lot Riya:)

[Robert]

Nice verse of self examination. I know we tend to look at others or things around us and write about them. It is good to write for yourself at times.

[fattycbreezy52]

yeah...gives me a good feeling:)Thankyou!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Most of my work is from another perspective. I guess that pretty much explains my love for "free-verse".
It's so easy to get totally absorbed into it, isn't it?

[fattycbreezy52]

Absolutely Kelly..Thanks!:)

[marcus]

Yes....this is very true!!

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes..thanks a ton!:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, this is so true isn't it?

most times readers think we are auto-biographical...and yet mostly we put ourselves in others' shoes, write from the perspective of someone else...i do that most often...not often about me...and you capture that feeling of needing sometimes to let our own emotions flow from the pen or the keys.

nicely done.

[fattycbreezy52]

I agree with every word of your review. This is so very true. And thanks for appreciating my work:)

[Kshitij Srivastava]

I enjoyed reading it. Lovely poem :)

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks Kshitij!:)

[~]

Your heart is beautiful sweet Breeze!! And what is a poet if not someone who loses themselves in their verses so others can find them?

[fattycbreezy52]

So true Moonie..Thanks for the review love:)

[~]

love you sweet one!!

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An empathetic poet... one whose heart belongs to the world... forgetting she, too, is a part of the great vastness called life... a wonderful self-reflective piece giving us a glimpse into the person behind the poet... love this!

[fattycbreezy52]

I can really revel in the ecstasy of such beautiful comments and compliments today. Thanks FT:)

[....................]

revel away, fcb... you are kindly welcome :)

[Misery]

With your busy days of learning, weary nights of studying, and limited free time filled with empathizing, it is good that you found a small moment to write for yourself, dear Fatty.

[fattycbreezy52]

You always amaze me by understanding me and my clues. Thanks Kevin:)

[Misery]

You are surely welcome.