Convoluted lovers

                                                 

Brushing lips,

No insane kissing

Loving passionately;

No room for steamy sex

Narcotic state,

However,sobriety reigns supreme.

Succulent enzymes and organs,

Acting as energy supplements.

His charged hands,

Shredding her baby pink

Threads of which 

Have been gathered aesthetically

Relaxed curves and leg lifting,

Brown curls and flaxen knees.

Hair carpeted in a lovely shade of mahogany

Striking the radiant masculinity.

Tender fingers in a spiral pattern

Coiled demurely at the nape of his neck

And moon like a disco ball;

Setting the rhythm and pace.

Every slow movement;a form of dance

Every hue;unfurling the paint.

Author's Note

thanks for reading this convoluted piece

Reviews

[Riya.G30]

This is a great piece. I love the how you handled the subject with so much of subtlety. Every touch between the two feels passionate yet poignant. Beautiful. :)

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks a lot for understanding this.Gives me immense joy:)

[Justin]

that was a really good piece, you were able to talk about how love can be confusing, the picture that you have with it, sets everything up for the poem :) great job :)

[fattycbreezy52]

oh thanks a lot.I wanted someone to analogate with the picture:)

[Justin]

your welcome :) that was an amazing idea that you did that, you could build something off the picture

[fattycbreezy52]

thanks a ton;)

[Justin]

your welcome, keep it up and i will continue to read :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Soft and sensual in whispered hues of the adoration and respect of two people for one another. The picture adds to the softening of this piece.
You are a busy bee today FCB.

[fattycbreezy52]

haha yes........one piece after another;D
Thanks for an amazing review:)