The steamy shower screen

Like a tortilla chip 

       Dipped in the Jalapeño of the Western sky,

The sun

Strips her naked

Before the philanderer screen;

Conspiring with the customary shower.

The water trickling down her length,

Embraced her skittish organs

As if tracing several lazy circles on her bare body.

Closing the translucent chamber,

Her foam covered body

Inhales the gifted comfort.

Sticking her femininity against the screen

She reposes insouciantly under the nonchalant dribble,

To think.

Author's Note

Thanks for reading okay!:)

Reviews

[Rm]

Good job and great imagination!

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks a lot Rocky!:)

[Rm]

Your welcome :)

[marcus]

A different perspective! I think this is very good!

[fattycbreezy52]

Aaaaaw thanks for your thoughts on this:)

[ron]

Very interesting and erotic.

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes, indeed! Thanks:)

[ron]

You are most welcome. Thank you for sharing ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wow you certainly know how to describe and relay emotions. The ending of this gives such a picture of someone troubled or with a lot on her mind. It is a smooth read with some sultry elements and yet it has pathos FCB.

[fattycbreezy52]

and thanks for the lovely review:)It does have pathos.......Right!