There's his blip inslide 👶

                       

Incomplete organs against my tummy

Like a brittle bush caressing a blubbery canvas.

Propelling and teasing my every capillary,vein and artery and making a ball of them playing the crimeless game of catch and throw,

That little toe tickled my puffy tissues and jumped upon my potbelly making it an exemplary trampoline. 

It kicked me once, 

It kicked me twice. 

Resting my charged palm upon the now hefty breasts,

I looked at him and smiled.

Pushing the customary chair aside, he came closer and mollycoddled my tummy saying, 

"Hey there is my blip inside" 

     

Reviews

[ANTO]

Wonderful portrayal of the joy that must accompany such an event. The playfulness of the couple - made me think of the term 'Babies having babies' which has become so common these days.
A fine piece FcB. Great word choice 'mollycoddled' - just divine.
Thanks for sharing this one. :)

[fattycbreezy52]

haha but how do you know they are babies having babies and not complete adults?I never mentioned it anyhwere no?;D
Anyway,thanks for your amazing review:)

[ANTO]

I 'felt' it with my amazing power to get inside the writers head , lol. (Could do with a cleaning in here... let me out... LET ME OUT Fatty ...!!)

[fattycbreezy52]

this is hilarious!;D

[ANTO]

well if you arent going to let me out then I shall become a wonderful squatter in your creative mind - whats for lunch?

[fattycbreezy52]

lol lol lol......squatter as in what?i hope not squatty potty;D

[ANTO]

not yet ... baking one though ...

[....................]

ah, the blip created by two, enjoyed by two even before it is ready to see the world... you've captured a joyful moment quite well...

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks FT:)

[Misery]

Once again you have placed yourself in the situation of another person and crafted an empathetic poem.
Nicely done, dear Fatty. You are indeed blessed with 'the gift'.

[fattycbreezy52]

Wowww thanks a lot for the comment:)

[Misery]

You are always welcome, dear poet.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A beautiful picture painted of the expectant parents, proud of their love. The two opening lines were creative and draw the reader in. This has a lovely honest tranquil feel and it could only have been written by a woman given the way it expresses such tender, insightful emotions and sensations.

[fattycbreezy52]

Yeah the joy of pregnancy. ..Thanks a lot!:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Never felt them lol! So are you with child now?

[fattycbreezy52]

No No.! !its not about me . It's about every expecting mother, in general.I am not a mother! :D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah Ok. But you captured it so well.