"A girlfriend of seasons"-a tribute to John Keats(a collaboration)

                                              

 

{SPRING}🍀 🍀 🍀

Whizzing through my senses

The Colors of your ardour

Under the hues of the sky 

My heart went dearer

Intoxicated by the fumes of lavenders 

Purple with kindled passion

Our love grew younger & fonder.

{SUMMER} 🍸 🍸 🍸 

Embracing the kittenish quality of the idiosyncratic

Sea to resuscitate the virgin, platinum body, 

The denuded canvas was furnished 

With its natural oil painting. Catnapped eyes, 

Before the authoritative sun bantering thobe

Narcotic lips waiting to kiss the

Red-orange-dark-blue sunset 

Upon the unconvincing boat spar. 

Meanwhile, making love to a glass of 

Fizzy lemonade and curving the body 

To a music of newly found love.

{MONSOON} 🌂🌂 🌂 

Tinkling drizzle move right down my spine

My feet sink deep amidst the damp sand

Longing to sway over & fill the chasm 

As I tasted the love’s first secret

Just as the heaven’s wept in agony

Over our tale that came to an end.

{AUTUMN}🍁 🍁 🍁 

No groping, no fumbling 

As love-season moves a step ahead 

Our love has ripened like the apples; 

In conspiracy with the matured sun. 

Amidst these glistening hues and 

Pestilence-stricken, fallen leaves

I make love to you, my destiny,

Sipping your soulful water and quenching my thirst

Caring least about the dormant winter.

{WINTER}❄❄ ❄ 

Dormant love and hibernation

Took a toll on us as I dozed off to sleep

In that slumber, my beloved, you left me

Leaving me breathless in this gelid lake

Cutting my skin, ripping me into pieces

As we bid goodbye, our love will rise again 

When skies will sing with heavenly whisper.

 

                             Thanks for reading  �'�

Author's Note

Okay so.There is a man who inspired me to create such a collaborative piece.Or,I can there was.I mean,John Keats!As a literature student,i have always been a fan of the young poet and the way he wrote as true romanticist about nature and its various aspects.The narcotic effect has been much emphasised in Keats' amazing odes like "To a nightingale" and "To autumn",So me and a friend decided to do something the Keatsian way.We have taken up all the seasons and love together.Now,its all upto you to interpret things your own way.No doubts,this poem cannot compare the Keatsian standard, after all,who would dare to challenge the young poet<3.Still,its a small attempt praising him for his romantic philosophy.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

What's not to love? ...this is simply gorgeous! Your presentation is charming, right down to the little icons.

"In that slumber, my beloved, you left me
Leaving me breathless in this gelid lake"

I believe "winter" resonated with me the most, but I really enjoyed this impressive offering!

[fattycbreezy52]

thank you so much for the review Kelly.You are a sweetheart:)

[~]

Ohh, you have presented the reader with a painted canvas of ingenious thoughts.
A delicious write, and I love your original 5th season added with class.
I cannot pick a favorite season, but i do love Keats, and I love this too :D

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha thanks a lot for your amazing words...And i love you:)

[~]

awwww, i love you too cutie pie!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Well FCB I think you came close and definitely a wonderful tribute to Keats. This has lovely flavours to it and hints that mysterious bond between two lovers as you colour it with hues of the seasons.

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes, this was the one I wanted you to see haha.And you have once again cracked all the codes. Damn!
I have some intelligent critics out here:D
Thanks John:)

[Deepak Belbase]

a beautiful poem, I enjoyed it from core of my heart. Very Impressive!!

[fattycbreezy52]

thanks Bel:)

[Deepak Belbase]

ur welcm miss.....