Lucky are those marathons!

Lucky are those marathons!

A Poem by fattycbreezy52

                      

© 2015 fattycbreezy52


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fattycbreezy52
Thought of doing something new.Hope ya''ll like it!

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Yes it is awesome! I like the fun way you presented these lines. And what great and profound truths trickling with each word. :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

Aha!it is;D thanks dear:)
I like it, I really do! Great technique, imprinting words on pictures. I do a lot of my own quotations that way.

So, you like Keats? Me too. ...adore him actually!

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

I am in love with Blake and Keats.....Had Keats been there today,I would have married that amazing .. read more
Some guys don't deserve to walk a foot with her... his loss, I imagine,,, love the format and the piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

Obviously, you are correct.Haha...Thanks! :)
It's amazing what we can, and cannot, bring ourselves to do!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

Raising a glass I would say a "true story".Haha, thanks for your amazing and truthful words buddy! :.. read more
well he is crazy i guess,loved the picture you painted

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot:)
 wordman

9 Years Ago

your welcome a lot
Wow! You paint the emptiness and pain of indifference by contrasting the effort he is willing to expend on both activities. It presents a very clear picture and is full of pathos FCB,

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

thankyou,thankyou:)
This is another piece of gold!
Short, sweet and to the point,
love it:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot James.Means a lot coming from someone equally amazing like you:)

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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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