Stripper

If it's easy to take our clothes off while having sex...............

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Why is it difficult to undress our souls to other people?       

Reviews

[Gee]

Easy to give everything when nothing is expected and all is appreciated.I think I may well be one of the lucky ones!

[fattycbreezy52]

woww two reviews on one poem?Or was it meant for something else?

[Gee]

Oops,that should have been a continuation of our conversation..

[fattycbreezy52]

That's okay!:)

[Willard Wells]

Interesting thought you have presented. Very nice. Thanks

[fattycbreezy52]

thanks for your thanks:)

[Gee]

Nice,in my youth after a few lagers I'd give everything to any woman desperate enough to accept!!!!Liked this

[fattycbreezy52]

lol but gone are those youthful days.Now I expect you to give your soul to the woman of your life;D

[Gee]

She had had possession of both my soul and heart for 23 years now and will still have after death

[fattycbreezy52]

that's what i call a real "man"*applauds*;)

[Jamestown]

Very thought provoking piece of work:)
With this piece you have opened a door to people's prescriptions,
and opinions and I think that is a brilliant:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[fattycbreezy52]

and this is such an amazing comment on your part.Thanks a lot:)

[dan]

Breezy, I hope to see this in a book of literary quotes some day. Very profound and so true. My compliments! take care...dan

[fattycbreezy52]

This is such an amazing and encouraging comment!
Hopefully Dan.Keep praying. Thanks a lot:)

[Abigail]

Interesting point. It is difficult to make known our souls and true feelings to others.

[fattycbreezy52]

Aha! an interesting answer too!:)

[B]

Maybe because our souls are way more fragile than our bodies

i believe in concealing both

[Abigail]

True point!

[fattycbreezy52]

Aha!a good point! :) I am happy to receive some amazing answers from you guys:);)

[....................]

great question... i think it's because once the soul is laid bare the mystery disappears... I, for one, would rather a lover kept her soul clothed, allowing little glimpses here and there :)

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha there should be this concept of "partial gazing":D

[....................]

yes... partial gazing... i like that concept :D.... oh, wait a minute, isn't that called peeping???? lol

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes, in a cool dictionary; ) fits perfectly;):D

[....................]

haha, yes, indeed

[~]

A good question that begs for more questions...i wonder if people dress their souls to protect them, and is that wrong..

[fattycbreezy52]

Aha!an amazing question moon.It's not wrong to wear a dress but it's bad to have it worn and kept intact during an intercourse with your beloved;D;D

[~]

Mmmmm... maybe when you grow up you'll see that things are more intriguing when they're not completely revealed. :D

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes, may be! you are right .I guess something looks better if hidden;)

[ron]

A very profound question.
I think because our souls are the most private part of us that we keep hidden from even the one's we love.

[fattycbreezy52]

Aha! I like your views on this. Thanks for the review buddy:) Helps a lot!

[ron]

Thank you and your welcome