Not at all beautiful

Some hypocrites will never change!

Chatoyant eyes and impressive beauty!
You would try any opticals and salons for that.
You will still be that rotten feature at the very core
Drenched and all prostate in my trash can.

My heart doesn't skip a beat upon seeing you
Infact, it feels ashamed on having confronted you
The fact is it's concealed behind that shield like bosom.
Otherwise,it would have run like a lunatic out open on the streets.

The irony is you want to catch that pear-shaped organ,longing hard to run away from you.
Your breath reeks.
You swarthy complexion does not care enough to complement you.
You clothes just did the favour of covering some vital organs
Otherwise,
The fabric has long ago, stopped hugging you.

Those thighs are elephantine.
Not even sure how to put it!
An infuriated elephant will stamp me under its foot
If at all such a comparison is made.

If you jog to acquire a slim,sleek figure
No one would ever sculpt you.
Carvings will be so loose
As to be easily washed away by those turbulent streams,leaving behind just sands.

Those sands will be of no time
Devoid of all things tagged as beneficial
No plant even on the verge of dieing
Would bent to derive the pleasure of living once again from these sands.

You think you would give rise to a vast empire
Your beau would be it's umpire for sure
But, this vegetal love would lack that amazing quality
What then would your boastful quantity account for?

Had you grown up a little
There would be no malice
Your grey matter only saw your length grow
but itself slept eternally.
Alas!
We do not have in store any more princes to wake up that sleeping beauty.

Author's Note

Thanks for reading!
Captcha:non(fatty).....Wow what a coincidence; )

Reviews

[Tom McRoberts]

I could have done without the second-person address in this one! I pray I never cause you any offence, this is proof that you can spit venom with the best of them! Great write.

[fattycbreezy52]

I don't know why I used the second person address. But behind this you are hidden "they":D
thanks though:) your comments are damn good:)

[Great Aunt Astri]

Yes, you have got your point across. I am undecided if the 'wordiness' is a plus or minus. Sometimes brevity can make more impact. But on reflection, I can really feel the emotion in the poem, and it was a good read

[fattycbreezy52]

Don't mind my brevity. It's just an honest, instantaneous thought provoked here.Had I only that slow motion thing to formulate things in a better way.But it would have changed the urgency felt by my heart. The fact that you liked it is the biggest. Thank you and keep reviewing:)

[Great Aunt Astri]

Yes, the heart has its own way of speaking. You might like to come back to your poem at a later date. I often do with my poems, and edit out the bits that my heart got a bit carried away with!

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
I know what you mean some people just will not change,
you used great wording and descriptions, definitely a pleasure
to read:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks a lot James. It's been a long time. You reviews ate quite encouraging.Thanks and keep reviewing:)

[fattycbreezy52]

Are quite encouraging*

[Matching Socks]

Ha! Nice captcha!
True indeed, a leopard can't change its spots. Once a cad, always a cad.

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha.So true! thanks for reading this Ana:)

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome!