Jelly

Jelly

A Poem by fattycbreezy52
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A fantasy poem on jelly

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As translucent as a jelly,
Dispersal took place upon that milky white surface
Sucking the moisture-laiden wall-to-wal carpet, marked with undulating bands of colours.

A kiddish flip flop which probably came off that tiny foot
Mingled with the slimy surface around
When the obsequious attitude completely failed.

Gelatin can make a heap of jelly come alive.
What is it even destined to?
A hilarious process of warming and then cooling within a mould?
It's like weltering and tossing upon that fiery deluge
And literally begging the equipments to stop gang-raping her.
Until that colossus refrigerator would provide her with the necessary first aid
Cooling within those deep, prayerful moulds would heal every charred surface,
Injured by a noisy, overbearing thrash.

Zest has a limit.

She would not imagine herself happy with such presumptuous and cocksure audacity
She herself is the beating lobe of a human heart.
Divided by fissures
Raw and hanging in every aspect.

If loosen the grip,
She would just spring clear of the ground by a sudden muscular effort
But wait a minute,
What kind of muscles does she have?

In other sense,she might convey something called jealousy which they feel when she is sumptuously prepared
Yet, is lucid and lovely
She is clear
And understands everything.


Jelly understands everything.

© 2015 fattycbreezy52


Author's Note

fattycbreezy52
Thanks for reading!

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The title pulled me in... Very creative Breezy..you made jelly don't to life and gave it layers!
It actually reminds me of little rhyme we would sings as kids..
"Jelly on a plate, jelly on a plate, wibble wobble wibble wobble , jelly on a plate!!
Lol so silly I know but your fault for reminding me heheh!



Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

Haha Sereena.I always look forward to your comments.And yes,it's definitely my fault for reminding y.. read more
sereenaoutloud

9 Years Ago

Oh I know right? To be so carefree again lol :)
fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

Yes*_*right
Rather sticky and sweet but lovely. I like the content and flow. Thanks,

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your thanks! :)
When i first saw the title I was sort of amazed. Jelly? i really wanted to know what you would write about it. Its quite an unusual topic and you totally pulled it off. Great effort.

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

Haha, you really got my point. Thanks a lot dear . Glad you liked it:)

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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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