Hot chocolate

My love for something abstract explained in a way which your grand daughters also would not think of:D (no offence)

Fumes coming off that intricate vessel with some tiny perforations tickle my senses
Making them oscillate like a pendulum, going to and fro.

Brown is the colour I would die for.
His eyes were that pure brown.
His hair had the crispness of chocolate brown,
A chocolate he was, melting in that juxtaposed sun, shining above, tantalizing him by offering its every possible ray.
It shined upon him from different angles and enhanced the chocolate he embodied.

I could suck those drops coming out of his
burnt body,
And whip that chocolate trying to make that thicker and concentrated thing, a bit like a paste.
A mug would have been too conventional to carry his chocolate like blood.
Afterall, a vessel cannot just compare something immeasurable in concrete terms.

But he was not abstract
His blood was dark .

As dark as a dark chocolate which I would refurbish with cashewnuts and almonds and refrigerate till it cools down intensely.
The roll of that piece upon my tongue and the nasty gambol with the tip of my tongue would melt it incessantly.

Had we not seen Charlie and the Chocolate factory,
I would have started my own chocolate factory.
I would have sculpted his every chocolate detail with the delicacy of my own artistic hands
I would choose him over thousands of those Wonka bars.
He would pour down his choco lava upon thousands of those girls who fantasize about bathing in a chocolate fountain.
There would be no lumps and no creases!
Concentration would soothe and send your tongue on a holiday.
Your remaining senses would do the work of your tongue and devour his every bits and pieces ,until you crunch him, harder and harder.
Your chocolate -laiden moist fingers would be sucked by me, turn by turn
And you would just close your eyes and say
"This is heaven"

Author's Note

Love chocolates? Bite him then.

Reviews

[Peach]

It sounds kinda, lustful. But I like the change of words. I haven't read these words before:
-Perforation
-Juxtaposed

Pretty amazing.
And don't say you're not good at expressing, you're fantastic!

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha,thanks a lot dear:)
I love your review.If I am fantastic, it's you who draws it out of me:)

[sereenaoutloud]

What a 'sweet delicious' write FCB52...you have a obvious craving for chocolate lol
This made me smile...loved it girlie!

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha thanks sereena.You are a sweetheart:)

[Tom McRoberts]

The opening couple of lines are carrying a little bit of baggage, language wise, making them a little difficult. The rest though is hilarious, imaginative and splendidly written! Extra emphasis on the 'hot' in hot chocolate here, and rightly so--the lactose intolerant and diabetics notwithstanding, who doesn't eroticise those sweet bars of glory!?

[fattycbreezy52]

Woww your review describes those bars of glory in a precise manner. Afterall,our love for chocolates knows no bounds:D

[ANTO]

You've really thought about this - I mean reaaaallllly thought about this, which is why its somewhat hotter than hot chocolate.
A fun write about a fungi - sorry, I meant a fun guy, not a mushroom. I am not going down that road.

Your pen is so versatile Fatty.
well done here :)

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha thanks a lot Anto. You are a charm that grows powerful everyday!

[~]

This definitely made me smile and I can imagine you on a trip to chocoland next to Johnny Depp ;)

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha, thanks babe:)

[Abilash Uttama]

You're so in love with chocolate, enjoyed reading your fantasy. Great write !

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha, I am not in love with chocolate, but HIM.Jk! you're right.Thanks;)

[Abilash Uttama]

Welcome :)