The real s**t

You think there's only one type........????? I guess there are lot more

Bruised all over,
Intense medication required.
Blood oozing out of the minuscule pores of misery
Doing a samba dance, weltering and tossing on the lateral sides.
When asked it says,
"Go with the flow, baby"

A nasty sausage trying to make it's way into the real Macmuffin,
Fidgeting under the underpants,
Looking for the answers to some unsolved mysteries.
Lying like a brute,
Without even opening the shoes, while, in bed.

Sucking the blood from an opened, dissected chicken
And spreading it all over the floor,
Playing the nasty game of Detective Conan.
And I threw up,
Like a hot lava emitting itself from that nanoscopic hollow eternally.
There is no Period, no full stop.
Little bugs decomposing that filthy scar,
Deepening it all the more
Until no scrape is left behind.

Shitting that branded wedding dress out in the open just because you did not get a washroom across the street.
What money and what celebration?
S**t gets the better of the situation
Leaving you pale, like a moron.

And you are absolutely open,
Like a dead body
Ready for the process of necropsy.
While the docs are busy having a real liquor tinged with your sparkling blood.

Author's Note

Kindly refrain from puking out! thank you!

Reviews

[Nerf]

The animalistic side of humanity. Although grotesque, it is very raw and in your face. So in that regard you've accomplished what you've set out to do, make your readers go woah.. dude...really? That's talent.

[fattycbreezy52]

Hahaha , I am glad that I could bring that change. Thanks a lot:)

[Nerf]

If you don't mind me asking where in India are you from? :)

[fattycbreezy52]

Kolkata:);)

[fattycbreezy52]

Why ...are you from India too?

[Nerf]

Yes from Mumbai.

[ANTO]

I just about held my meal down lol. Its real thats for sure. Its not s**t but. :))

Just in reference to your choice of title 'The Real S**t', I'm just after watching a comedy clip by an Irish comedian from the 1970's. Dave Allen.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4IfoUM6a4bA
Fast forward to 3:46 - its all about the word s*it and its use in the States

[fattycbreezy52]

Oh Dave Allen. I have heard a lot about him from a friend. And woww this sounds interesting. I will surely take a look at that video. .And I know s**t is like a real s**t, used in different senses by different people. It's so damn messy.Infact, we tend to instill this word into every little sentence or phrase nowadays. .Such a tendency. .Aarrghhh!

[Tom McRoberts]

Love it. Having read Burroughs' 'Naked Lunch' and seen Pasolini's 'Salo' I thought I'd never be disgusted by anything in art ever again. Thanks (I guess) for surprising me, this is gross, Fatty. The first line of the second stanza is what probably hit hardest, twisting the familiar is often the most effective way to get a rise from someone!

P.S. 'McMuffin' is spelt without an 'a'. I'm ashamed to admit that, don't want my own name being implicated!

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks a lot Tom.Oh and Mcmuffin comes without an 'a'? Oh really? Okay may be it's my mistake .Because I saw it with an a somewhere. I got confused.Extremely sorry for this. Thanks for pointing it out.So nice of you:)