A diabolical and dubious woman

A diabolical and dubious woman

A Poem by fattycbreezy52
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Read this and figure out the hidden conundrums by yourself.I am not gonna help Too dejected to voice my opinion(kindly forgive me)

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I told her once,
"Tread slowly because you are treading on my dreams"

And today at 3:55 a.m,
She literally crushed those minute molecules of veneration under her Herculean feet
Alas!I am happy to announce--
"Hey,I am completely disillusioned"

In this age of f**k and chuck
True-blue and loyal love is found mutilated on a sidewalk at 4 am
Swiping hard to refresh and discover something
But it's the rotten trash or spam box which I always see.

She is too brawny a brute for me to endure her heaviness
I thought she was something delicate in the guise of that manliness!
She is as conventional as the humans around,
Until now her response was just a noise in the background.

© 2015 fattycbreezy52


Author's Note

fattycbreezy52
To the most diabolical and dubious woman I have ever known

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Only "friends" can stab us in our unprotected souls,
we never let enemies get close enough when our armor is removed.

Console thyself, dear poet, your heart is the nobler tragedian upon this stage.

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

friend?She is not even a friend.She is someone elder to me,of the same profession
It's fine.M.. read more
Oooh, I like this. 'Alas' and 'Herculean' make it sound so classical, which jars superbly with the modern grit, the 'f**k and chuck'. The juxtaposition gives the sense the narrative voice is trying to make something sound beautiful, but failing--fitting given the boisterous way you've described this woman.

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

yes,this woman!She has made my life hell:)
I owed her a lot more veneration than she ever des.. read more

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Added on April 29, 2015
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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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