My unicorn is sipping

Have you ever observed a unicorn drinking water?No? Well,go ahead and read this

                                 

Let the river flow

Let it not go back to the place it has come from.

           If you do this,

The amount of displacement in terms of physics will be a complete zero.

Look at 2014,

How swiftly did it go!

Sometimes over the rock-beds,

and sometimes over the pebbles,

did it flow.

Someday it was calm and someday tumultuous

and someday all of a sudden it was like a cascade , filling a beautiful water pool below,

where our thirsty,amazing unicorns came and rejoiced its flow.

And sipped at the sweetest water ever,

Offering their gratitude and courteous bow.

Author's Note

I so wish to adopt one unicorn as a pet<3;D

Reviews

[~]

Oh I like this one! It made me think of two things: 1. time goes by fast, 2. but once in a while we get stunned by beauty and things that keep us live on to await other beautiful and marvelous things.
and i hope you do have a unicorn as a pet and that he/she/it :) will not hurt you with that horn :D

[fattycbreezy52]

haha moon you are superb when it comes to analysing .You have got it nearly perfect.
And yes it's cool that you reminded me about that notorious horn thing.I really forgot that activity on the part of a unicorn because things damn beautiful can equally hurt you:)so true:)

[Misery]

The dear poet desires a unicorn...
Let them stampede from emerald fairy fields with uni-horns glistening in the dewy dawn.
Thank you for the imagery, sweet fatty.

[fattycbreezy52]

And thanks for the middle line which you have written in your review.It's beautiful.Thanks for your thanks:)

[Misery]

Always welcome.