An unnecessarily delayed reply

An unnecessarily delayed reply

A Poem by fattycbreezy52
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Why some people cannot take things the way we want them to take ? They say be humble.I am being perfectly mainstream.Where am I smiling then?

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I kept waiting for the reply,which was unnecessarily delayed
A reply to my art-spontaneous and unrehearsed:
Unpremeditated and heart-mending.

Buying bullshit is cheaper than buying my poem
Admiring things handmade is not preferable to a mere artifice.
What will become of this world in the years to come?
Whose head will be on whose shoulder in the times of distress?

© 2015 fattycbreezy52


Author's Note

fattycbreezy52
thanks for reading another mainstream poem by a mainstream poet like me:)

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Well-said, dear fatty, and your sentiments are shared by many.

We pen these things, and give them wings, like homing-pigeons, submission-pigeons, and they make us wait, and wait...and wait, just to hear them say...not what we're looking for.
What are they looking for? Assembly-line, mass-produced, politically-correct, non-judgmental verse. Perhaps we should all write greeting card poetry and just stuff our inspiration and creativity into a shoe box.

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

Now this has come to a shoe-box.They are making life worse. They say be humble. But not quenching ny.. read more
Misery

9 Years Ago

Here are some words to ponder...
“The world doesn't make sense, so why should I paint pictu.. read more
fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

hahahaha I love Picasso and his paintings.And this quote rocks.Thanks Kevin:)

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Added on April 28, 2015
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fattycbreezy52
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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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