Binge-drink

Drink if he actually cares

Give me a topic to write

and I will crumple the sheet and shove it in your face!

           Do not expect me to think and write

Allow me to ramble over the areas of impossibilities which 98 out of 100 fail to crack.

            I have solved the conundrums !

Open that conventional casement and allow the air outside to enter within,

To enchant me ,to mesmerise me!

Atleast, it smells better than your socks and feet!

I have a strong enmity against claustrophobia!

               I will binge-drink and drown myself in that feeling entirely.

The feeling which will enable me to see things which you cannot see in your sober state.

Who said that a drunkard is not an asset,but a liability?

              Can you carry me home after I'm completely out?

Will you give me a ride?

                               Will you ring the doorbell for me and place me gracefully in my cosy bed ?

Will you actually place my little bunny and teddy beside me before trying to slam my bedroom door?

        If you can,you qualify in the test of showing basic affections and affinity.

If you cannot,I promise I will never drink to my heart's content.

                                  Forget about the fragments of my poetry and go buy "The playboy' or erotica

and beautify your house with the posters of nudity.

                                      I know you will roister much boisterously while having those Swiss and Belgian chocolates!

Why would you care for the yellow pages of my stupid poetry?

                             

Author's Note

thanks for reading

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome write my friend!!!

[fattycbreezy52]

thanks buddy:)

[AaronFreitas]

You're welcome :)

[Tom McRoberts]

Wonderful play on the form here. It looks almost 'garish', matching perfectly the pomp mania of bingey nights. I also really like the first two lines you've enthused the act of writing with a violent edge. Great stuff, keep it up!

[fattycbreezy52]

Wowwwww.That is indeed a good observation.Thanks a lot:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

so much stuggle...........
crying on a loudspeaker.........for freedom for due attention..........for appreciation.......for sanity......for rescue......for help........
quite unique.......and dizzy........in a good way....
i loved it!!!
:)

[fattycbreezy52]

Umm i guess it's not a struggle for me because I have been rendered a complete stranger to this word called "love".I have grown sick and tired.I am fading away.
That's what I am trying to convey by introducing a minimal criteria.
If a boy can do atleast this much for me,I shall settle and love him.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

okay so this is just the cut-off...........i can say stay hopeful.........life is beutiful......day after night and stufff......etc........but i will say just one thing: burn down everything, just burn hope at the end.

[fattycbreezy52]

Wowwwwww that is a what I call a bombastic poet.Loved the last line.

[fattycbreezy52]

that's what i call*

[Pushkar Prabhat]

haha..............!!! :D :D