Let's once stop at the places where the trains never stop!

Let's once stop at the places where the trains never stop!

A Poem by fattycbreezy52
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It's not just about nature.Read it and solve the hidden conundrums on your own.Goodluck:)

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Let's once stop at the places where the trains never stop!
To discover and solve the conundrums they envelope
If given a moment,I would make the most of it
Trying to gambol with those enigmatic boughs projecting from an unfathomable tree.

The tree reminds me of my grandma.
Who said that she had hair completely white?
She was fresh and cocoa-coloured ;like a figure dominating serenity.

Let's obliterate the word "family" for a while
They are oblivious of my wanderings;
Let me just light up their faces,
By taking home a handful of posies.

Oh my god,
Are these golden fields even real
Or,a stupid,fantasy-play once again,by my mind?
These fit into the category of sensual
As defined by the stupendous poets from time to time.

You see,I'm no Wordsworth,a boy of nature
But today he should have been alive to see his great,great,great...admirer,living as a pantheist!

Why do I need to be sun-kissed?That's so mainstream!
I need to elevate and kiss the sun and become a pantheist.
I need to get inside those tiny,rabbit holes and look at the small world on the other side.
Let me make myself flexible and cuddled up all throughtout its length where light and darkness can have a foreplay
I promise not to look at that intercourse,
I promise not to brag about it.

I can have those edible leaves and freshly harvested wheat for the brunch,
Since the train-tea only gives me a feeling of expunge
The luscious water from those tiny rivulets can make me young again
But,wait a minute,when was I even old?
It's just that I was deprived of this nature's gold and thus failed to be bold.

Even if I miss my train,there will be no regrets
Afterall,nature is not conventional or an everyday-friend
Yes,I can even see the stars from my bedroom window
But the joy of seeing it here cannot match that trivial thought

I can lie amidst those yellow posies and play my guitar
Even if I am a novice,nature will transform it into a newly invented art
I can really afford to spend the night ,
Even if they say the witches might come out
I can never fret Hecate under the guidance of the stars so devout.

I can only dream of it,a dream of meeting someone so perfect
But nature will remain a stranger;
A stranger so perfect
That I will never be able to see it again.

© 2015 fattycbreezy52


Author's Note

fattycbreezy52
Though a bit long, it's worth it.Thanks for reading

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It is a bit long, but you have formed it into nice bite-sized pieces.
I love the imagery, but your conundrums do have me stymied.
You may be able to declare "Check-Mate" soon...but for now, I am still puzzling over this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

10 Years Ago

omg?was i really so complicated at this ?I guess I am very much like Blake.No one could ever underst.. read more

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Added on April 15, 2015
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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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