At a bad height

I thought of sharing this

I rise and reach that peak.

I stay there for a while.I enjoy that elevation to my heart's content,but after a few days,fall down drastically!

These are inward processes and outside seems to be blurred.People go by face-value but do not penetrate deep to see that small girl crying in a corner of the kindergarten playground while all the other toddlers are sliding and swinging.This girl is no one but my insides,which are still screaming hard at a matured age of 19.

I write in vain.People seem less interested in acknowledging my words.Some sympathise and some completely ignore.Yes,I am no poet.But like them I get visons.When I experience things,I just jot them down.

My points will help you pass no exams,

My words will extinguish like the fire in that hearth.

But I'll still kindle or light that spark.

Today it's me,

But tomorrow it can be you!

It can be you

Author's Note

Thanks for reading

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh i like this so much...vulnerable to beat hell ;) straight talk in plain language but it does sing ..this kind of pain in a very tender heart ...even at the ripe old age of 19 :))))))))))))))))))))) is so moving ... i am a sucker for the underdog ... and i do empathize with your protagonist ... but you are wrong about words...they are not extinguished in the fires of a hearth ..many times one wishes they were ...but our words...especially the written word spoken .. makes ripples for a lonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng time says i! glad i came searching for something new from you fatty ... found this old one instead :) hope i do see something new from you soon..... peace girl!
E.

[fattycbreezy52]

OMG! First of all a very big hellllllooooo from my side to you, E. I just happened to log in here after a long time and realised in no time that this review was posted by you a year ago. I guess I am late. But one is never too late:D Btw I am laughing at my 19 year old self right now. Currently, I am 23 (how time flies right!) Still it's good to read the amateur version of me on here (feeling nostalgic). Hope you are doing well. How are things at your end? Let me know, E. Take care:)

[Einstein Noodle]

hey fatty! things are good at this end of the universe ... personally speaking anyway ... the socio-economic world is too passionate and divisive these days .. i even quite keeping up with the news it is so angst filling ... that way i can keep hope closer ;) i do hope you are able to visit more often and share more of your poetry :)

[Stonz P.]

"at a matured age of 19"
I chuckled at that..but I do understand the chain of thought. Am more interested in the theme of this, however.

I have been through the sort of phase and still get these bouts of thoughts as expressed..and I like the message at the end.
Again, a good opinion to read.

[fattycbreezy52]

Well.I feel I am just matured.Time has made me so.Though 19 doesn't seem to be as great an age for this.Yet,the world around has kind of conspired with my age,my thoughts.Thanks for reading this.I am glad :)

[Stonz P.]

All I will say is I felt real mature at 18... then within suddenly I decided to go batshit crazy.. Maturity sucks :P not my thing in the least.
That is what I meant. It was not condescending.
Any age is great..if you ask me. You are talented, continue doing what you believe in; that is what will count. And you're welcome.

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks amazing person:)