Sing my song

Sing my song

A Poem by fattycbreezy52
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comprehend while reading each and every line

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Sing my song...
For it can disperse your pain like those milky white pearls and
transform your agony into an alluring pearlescent,lustrous garland
wearing which you will depart to a world unanticipated.

My song has immutable ingredients of eternal sunshine,beauteous flowers and whizz.
My song has the protection of a brother for his sweet sister,the responsibility of a father for his princess daughter,
the love of a husband for his adorable wife,the care of a mother for her lucky son.
Sing my song and transcend to a world aberrant enough.

© 2015 fattycbreezy52


Author's Note

fattycbreezy52
Thought of composing some lyrics.Hope you will like it

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This is such a sweet song. The next time I see someone sad I'll sing this to them. :) I hope it is released some day for the whole world to hear because everyone needs to hear words like these. Hats off to you for writing such a beautiful song. We need stuff like this these days. Bravo! :))
Besides being comforting, each line is so meaningful. Each line is a complete quote in itself. I liked the way you related your song to natural and beautiful things as well as family attachment. It has everything one needs to make another person feel better and is a beautiful and unique composition. Well done! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating.This comment is so touching.Glad that there are still some people.. read more
Bushra Naqshbandi

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome. :)

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Added on April 2, 2015
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fattycbreezy52
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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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