Me When You Disappeared

First Entry.

Pain. All of us may know how that felt. But everyone of us had some various definitions of that. 

Pain...

. The word itself hurts me. As I can feel it inside me. 

I don't feel any remorse to what you've done to me. I just feel the pain inch by inch as your words stab me in my back. I feel the blood as is trickles down on me, i feel the bones cracking up, i feel every tear as it pours down on my cheek, i feel every cry that made me catch my breath because i'm losing it, i feel myself losing life. 

Who needs mental and emotional help if all it needs is a single hand to put these pieces back together. 

Author's Note

Please comment if you liked it. Sorry i'm just new here. Trying to discover this.

Reviews

[Lady Pearl]

It is very difficult to describe precisely the pain we feel, your words are beautiful but im sure the pain still feels stronger than the words you used to describe it.
I feel the same way as well. Only one person can fix what is broken. and it's the one who broke it.
it feels as if we are doomed to never be fixed until we find the strength to fix ourselves.
Keep writing your pain it helps heal.

[Iflybyyou]

was this a poem? Or a cry for help? The answer is rather ambiguous

[Coyote Poetry]

All of us need support and concern.
"Who needs mental and emotional help if all it needs is a single hand to put these pieces back together. "
I agree with the above lines. Kindness of single hand and embrace of kindness can save us. Thank you Fatima for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[AkhilN]

It's pretty nice!
One can feel the pain through this
Everyone need someone to help them through difficult times, and many times it has to the person themself
Keep up the good work! :)