They lived happily ever after and she loved him forever .

They lived happily ever after and she loved him forever , 
that's all she wanted and , Everything he used to desire .

Though it took her very long to trust  him , 
and believe he aint a liar , 
One day finally she got to know` bout it , 
 '' She's all he needs 
her love is all he wanted to acquire " .

the day they met , 
seemed more beautiful than any magnificent sun set , 
Soon enough she was holding hand with the most " perfect person " on the planet ,               

he loved her incredibly , knowing  how silly she was , everytime  with a " Bee in her bonnet "

he saw her cornucopia of mistakes and laughed quietly to "himself ", 
for her , soon he became a part of her magical life , for her he was a lovable  Elf .

to world she was kinda Three dimensional paper doll , 
but for him , she was his " personal miracle " 
whom he loved more than his life , more than his  soccer n football .

her arms were locked behind his neck , and she wished she was stronger , 
to keep him a prisoner there , 
All girls were his compete  fan as  , he was the best soccer  player .

hidden , bottled up inside were the words he never said , 
yet she  Knew , 
every time he used to satisfy her saying ;
" the outside world holds no interest to me with out you " . 

and , forever they lived in their own wonderland ,
smiling , hugging , loving , walking though the meadows holding 
hand in hand .
- Fatima
dated : 21/01/2013.

Reviews

[Nightfall]

she loved him forever ....
i think he'd too say..."Never say Never..."
she'd b his charm forever,
i've never seen such a piece of writing ever...

anyway, i really loved your this writing,
this is ~varun, & may i ask...is that your real name "MISS Fatime Wani..."

The day they met, the rain was on their head,
they became wet, bt they weren't very sad...
they loved each others, because, they were mad,
that;s a spirit of love, couse..love is onself a craze/......
we can't forget love + lovely = lovable days,
because, if we do love...we can't forget someone's face.....
this is a true faith, love wants too faith,
love is a biker's break, that can stop your life within a sec....


anyway, love is simply a true game,
but it's also a fake & can destroy your name,
i think you this writing contains damn much pain,
because, i can feel this...because, i know LOVE IS A GAME...

may i ask , what was the that girl's name...?
is that your story , my dearest frnd....?????///
i know love became a new trend,
but we gotta know how to save ourself.....

you this writing' has contained alots of depth,
love is just a breakable shade...

anyway...well written , writing was good,
package wasn;t too bad,
i think you showed here reality my frnd,
i apprciate your thoughts for this ink of a pen....

[Fatima Wani]

Thanx a lot for everything ! :)

[MoriartyMesa]

I love the wording, the expression even the date stamp.

[Fatima Wani]

Thank you.

[zainul]

A sweet story expressed in simple and tangible words.
Appreciate your efforts.

[Fatima Wani]

Thanks sir. :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome.:)