Ocean

Do you ever feel the sheer terror that should be clawing at your throat buffered by the icy waves of his adoration that lull you into oblivion there is nothing that i fear more than being unable to swim in the ocean that you are

Reviews

[Neo]

Being in bad relationships feels like drowning. You can't keep your head up, but you don't really notice because you think you love them so much.
You captured this perfectly. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. You used the ocean to make your point. The ocean is wild and free. Can't hold love that is like the sea. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jamestown]

Wow! These few sentences say a ton and the message is very powerful, thanks for sharing
and b-blessed.