I'll never let you go

I just want you to love me.

Is that too much to ask?

Or has your thinking of me

become a daily task?

What happened to our moments,

the nights we stayed awake,

and fell asleep smiling

at each other's sake?

I knew when I first saw you 

your smile triggering the start

that you were something different

that would shape my lonely heart.

And every second of the day 

my mind lingered on you.

I guarantee you it still does.

Are you thinking of me too?

I know that what we have 

isn't easy to keep alive,

especially with this distance,

but my feelings will survive

because you've changed me for the better

like no one I know could,

I'll never let you go..

No, I'll never let you go.

Reviews

[KatiePie]

This piece is easy to relate to and has a wonderful flow - which is an attribute I greatly appreciate in poetry. Truly beautiful words formed to fabricate a lovely poem with a lyrical twist.
Great write.
-Cathrine

[Faati Jaan]

Thank you!