Innocent Sanctuary

Innocent Sanctuary

A Poem by Faati Jaan

My mind was an innocent sanctuary 
where I wrapped myself in thoughts of you, 
but I began to wrap myself too tightly 
and found that you suffocated too..

© 2014 Faati Jaan


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Taz
This is awesome!! I would love to read more work like this! I think that the elipsis at the end just adds to the dramatic output to this awesome work of art. I hope to find more amazing things from you and your words.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on July 21, 2014
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Faati Jaan
Faati Jaan

Kansas City, KS



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irani-amrikayi. persian hybrid lioness. developing muslim and therapist and human being. other unmentioned identities. i write what's in my heart; short poems about love, loss, hardships, relations.. more..

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