Time

I've written and recorded this with some simple guitar chords...maybe post it later..

Time, 

time makes you feel 

so empty

Time, 

time makes you feel

so alone

where have you gone?

Don't forget me..

And when you're gone

Don't regret me..

Time, 

time is like space

it is nothing

Time, 

time's all around

it is everything

Time is trying to comprehend 

something with no beginning or end

"Come out of the circle of life

and into the circle of love"

Time is trying to to fight

against the darkness of life...

Reviews

[Blood Ink Diary]

A very lovely poem, dear Fatemeh !

Ah, you have quoted Rumi's lines - thoroughly relish his writings, especially in Persian !
Keep penning. cheers

[Faati Jaan]

Merci Shaheen joon!

[Blood Ink Diary]

Khahesh mikonam Fatemeh joon !

[Sami Khalil]

Time is trying to comprehend... Well penned

[Faati Jaan]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....

[zainul]

Fatemeh,congratulate you for the lovely piece.

[Faati Jaan]

Thank you zainul :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome.:)