Whispering to me

I had posted this on my alternate account but deleted it, so I promise I didnt copy anyone!

I am quiet from behind the clouds,

My eyes caress the open airs your lips touch softly,

Your fingers are my clef,

I need not see beyond the stars with a song like yours,

Whispering to me.

I am softly alive behind the clouds,

My heart pounds obliviously as it seeks for the beat of yours,

Your skin is my only texture that speaks with life.

I can breathe now.

Because I can taste your breath from across the room,

Whispering to me.

I am breathing screams from behind the clouds,

My ears yearn for your voice and seek for your air.

I wrap my arms around your neck,

I can hear your pulse against mine,

Whispering to me.

I let out one soft whimper against the cloth of your shirt,

You begin to loosen your grip around my back,

Whispering that it will be okay,

Whispering to step out from behind the clouds,

Whispering that you'll be there every step of the way.

Your hope for safety is my blade.

I can hear your breath again,

Whispering to me.

Reviews

[laughinglullaby]

This piece is really beautiful.These lines stuck out to me the most.
" I am softly alive behind the clouds,
My heart pounds obliviously as it seeks for the beat of yours,
Your skin is my only texture that speaks with life."

[sarah]

This is an amazing piece! you are so talented

[Lily Mae]

I love it..x

[Revolutionary]

I love the image of you screaming from the clouds and being answered in a whisper.Beautiful

[☯]

Such a lovely, and beautifully written poem. I like the way this flowed and when I read this, I had this dreamy and light feeling inside me. The way you used the clouds to symbolize and the whispers, makes it mysterious and almost magical. Anotehr one of your amazing and beautifully written poems. Loved it :)