La, la

La, la
A voice for my melody,
It guides my way like a bridge to my soul,
over blue, blue waters with fleeting horizon lines,
Do you hear the song,
or is that just me?

Stand at the edge and take a breath,
Jump, no, dive,
Breathe in my words like a bane,
a sweet, sweet
Poison.

Do you feel that sting,
or is that just me?

La, la
A breath for my symphony,
Smile for the high notes, weep for the low.......
La, la
A touch for the chorus,
A scent for the refrain.

La, la
Do you feel that water glistening upon your skin,
or is that just...
me?

La, la
La, la

Did you submerge yourself in the waters
deep under the bridge,
or is that, dear
Is that just me?

Reviews

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

This was really soothing to read. I felt myself wanting to flow along with your words.
Nice job.

[Ruth]

I think this is unique! "LA LA" is expressive and a sound/melody heard and comforted by the self, so in that light love, it adds a really touching personal note to the poem, quite wonderful! xx

[Ashley]

Beautiful

[Ravyne Hawke]

a Very powerful poem.. I love the repetition of "La, la", it gave the poem a sing-songiness. I also love the words in italics.. very well done!

[LovelySparrow]

I love to reapeated "La, la" It made it so powerful. I also found myself reading it like a song. Wonderful :)

[Just Me]

This was just wonderful. Emotionally staggering! Lovely.

[Brette Medb]

This felt almost like a song, which worked perfectly with the addition of music into the piece. Great write.

B

[Lily Mae]

Using the cleansing properties of water with the soul soothing aspect of music makes this an excellent poem.. I love it..xx

[cfix]

Wonderful write here

[compositionc]

Music always calms the soul. Wonderful poetry.