How do you?

How do you train yourself

To look away from the light as it streams your way,

How don't you blame the sparkles

For kissing the tips of your hair with gleaming

Likeness with the truth,

How have you made yourself?

It's a bath of satin to your toes,

How do you turn yourself around like a rose,

Like a beautiful thread of ruffled emotion?

How do you breathe yourself to sleep at night?

Reviews

[c.m.]

Oh this is just perfect!

[Karli]

Amazing write. :)

[Just Me]

That was amazing. Definetly something to think about when your in class and just staring off into space.

[cfix]

Amazing write, something to ponder on

[Tasha]

Everyone has a question they would like to get answered, but cant figure out the answer... incredible.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

questions...without answers... story of our lives

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

We ask questions, wanting to know if this beauty is true, if it belongs to us. Good poem my friend.

[Hope]

Absolutely beautiful. I love it. Extremely well written, very concise but descriptive :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"How do you turn yourself around like a rose,
Like a beautiful thread of ruffled emotion?"
In this short and beautiful poem. You took me on a good field trip in words. The poem is amazing. I like the many questions that the poem open up. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote