Like you

I stroke the tension with a gentle tip of a nail,

Warming the preciousness of the chills-

Losing control is but a ghost of me now,

A ghost of the used-to-bes that gleam in your eyes,

In my eyes.

The mixture of beauty and soul

Shower the world with a serenity,

Beautiful-

Like you.

Reviews

[Derek S.Keck]

I don't ever know what to say to about your poetry other than it's always outstanding and leaves me without words. Beautiful piece!

[Judy Ponceby]

Excellently done.

[laughinglullaby]

i like it :) very sweet

[sentimental~ galore]

This was beautiful, a mixture of deep thought and words...lovely fascination.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

fascinating descriptions!

[halflives]

Very short, sweet, and hard-to-beat. Lovely.

[cfix]

This is so wonderful and ever so lovely. I enjoyed this.

[Elliot Kyron]

Gorgeous piece. The last two lines just bring it together flawlessly. Thank you so much for the wonderful read.

[compositionc]

This is the true definition for 'short and sweet'.

[Coyote Poetry]

In so few words. You create a powerful and beautiful poem. The gentle description made the poem a great pleasure to read. A very good ending to a beautiful poem of desire and appreciate. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote