Like you

I stroke the tension with a gentle tip of a nail,

Warming the preciousness of the chills-

Losing control is but a ghost of me now,

A ghost of the used-to-bes that gleam in your eyes,

In my eyes.

The mixture of beauty and soul

Shower the world with a serenity,

Beautiful-

Like you.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Lovely!
Nothing I can add to this trail of elegance! Except outstanding!
xx

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

"Beautiful-
Like you."
Aww . . . That's beautiful writing. (:

[~Lizzy♬]

Very pretty!
:)

~Lizzard~

[A.Noel]

i like it :)

[Ashley]

Sweet

[White Ink]

sweet :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Excellent write full of beauty and passion. This one really speaks to me for some reason and will definitely be favorited. Great job!

[Lily Mae]

It reminds me of my own experience of late lol... I love it.. Were you peeking? Your way with words always lands right in my heart and soul...you have a beautiful gift and I enjoy reading you very much.. Great write..xx

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

A poem of beauty, of believing in the precious gift of that someone special.