Living

I cry a teardrop,

so alive.

I cringe underneath the moon,

so alive.

I whisper a name,

so alive.

Reviews

[Abbie]

This is like yelling yay im alive i love it :)

[Lily Mae]

Your alive because you allow yourself to feel all these things.. I love it...xx

[MichelleClay]

in pain but still going. I liked it!

[compositionc]

It says nothing, but everything at the same time.

[Just Me]

Short n' sweet. Or should I say short n' powerful. This was beautiful and well written. I loved it. The fact that it was short even added two its powerfullness (if that's a word)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

wow, i really love this one! gorgeous though very short. that made it all the more powerful!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Few words, but thet sat so much my friend.