Living

I cry a teardrop,

so alive.

I cringe underneath the moon,

so alive.

I whisper a name,

so alive.

Reviews

[qaralynn]

not quite sure what it's about but I like it XD

[Ashley]

It's really short and full of emotion.

[White Ink]

and this poem is so short yet so alive :)

[Judy Ponceby]

Actions give life through emotion. :) Beautiful.

[Ravyne Hawke]

A beautifully penned poem in such few short words. Excellent job!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. In so few words. Create emotion and desire in your words. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[sarah]

this is really interesting

[Lilly Negoi]

essence of a forbidden life...

[A.Noel]

short and sweet :)

[laughinglullaby]

i like this :) says a lot without having to say too much. keep up the good work