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A song for the lonely

A song for the lonely

A Poem by fatalsymphonies

Oh little one, daughter of death,
oh friendly one, sister of fortune,
oh enthralling one, kissers of the lovers,

How dare you take a broken heart to shatter it alive,
how dare you smell a soul of treason and kiss it to revive?

Oh but you knew it the whole time,
stroking the seconds with your slender fingers,
a sneer escaping your thunders, your late night beatings,
you'll kill us no further than you already have.

Oh shadowed one, scared, frightened hider of the nights,
oh helpless one, cradler of his own thighs,
oh unsheltered one, aren't you just begging, begging, pleading
for just one last look into her eyes?

Here, now take my hand, weave my fingers through your embrace,
here, now take my lips, speaker of the words you'll desire to hear one day,
I'm writing for those like you, trapped in a world that
only the world can escape,
a victim, a loss, a painful night brewer.
Here, friend, here, here's my soul,
I trust for you to hold it dearly,
Here, friend, I promise not to love you, although I already do,
shadow of the night I hold like life to abide,
Here, here is for you, a melody to sing, pretending for words to arise,
Here, for you,
a song for the lonely.

© 2011 fatalsymphonies


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I love this intricately woven write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


What a lovely, moving song. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is full of passion and soul. It's beautiful. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


a passionate and vibrant poem~gorgeous classic lines~ one can feel the energy and the emotional impressions clear through~

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really love the passion in your poems...gives them an intensity that draws the reader in, making them feel connected.

Posted 13 Years Ago


That was really good. It flowed effortlessly. Wonderful. Inspiring. Everything a poem should be and more. Great Job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow! such a strong poem! wonderful work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this poem. I'm listening to Leonard Cohen and your poem and your words are on the same page. The description was very good. I like so many lines in this poem.
"Oh little one, daughter of death,
oh friendly one, sister of fortune,
oh enthralling one, kissers of the lovers,"
Thank you for the outstanding poem. I believe we must learn pain to realize sweetness rarely touches a life. Thank you.
Coyote


Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a really great write. You have an ability to share your thoughts, heart and soul with us through your words.. I love it!! :) x

Posted 13 Years Ago



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I'm just your average Fatal Symphony... Sometimes I write stories, other times poetry. Ache with me? more..

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