IN BETWEEN

A POEM ABOUT A BREAK-UP AND THE EMOTIONS LOVE BRINGS ON.

QUESTIONS ARISING 'BOUT LOVE

ABOUT HATE

TOO HAVE ONE WITHOUT THE OTHER

WHAT DOES IT TAKE

ONE MINUTE I LOVE YOU

THE NEXT ITS HATE

EMOTIONS STRAIGHT TAINTED

MY MIND PLAYING GAMES TOO

I'M HAPPY

THEN SAD

REMINISCING 'BOUT YOU

TIME GONE BY,

STILL TIME THAT'S PAST

GOOD OUT WEIGHS THE BAD

THAT'S WHY LOVE LASTS

Author's Note

OPINIONS WELCOMED GOOD OR BAD! I CAN HANDLE THE TRUTH....(:

Reviews

[Kett]

it still rips too close to the heart. for i know it too well myself.
kudos to putting it out there on a plate.. for it is not easy.

[DC Gentleman]

in the 3rd line "TOO" should be "TO"

but thats nothin big.... I love the flow of the poem... it just glides from line to line as I read it..
Love is truly complicated..

Great work..