YOU!!!

I look at you,
you looked back,
you smiled,
i smiled back,
your gorgeous eyes sparkled,
i couldnt help but stare,
i kept staring,
you started walking,
until we were locking lips,
we both exploring,
right infront of everyone,
the teachers gave us dirty looks,
but we didnt care,
we kept going,
till the bell went,
we went back in holding hands,
everyone saying something good about us,
we felt really good,
we have never been apart from eachother since then.

by jessica freeman

Reviews

[Moii]

I think its a great idea, it needs a few times looking over just to see if you can add more explanation, but WELL DONE, you have the talent!

[bailish]

Clever writing. I'm not sure I'd turn this in to a teacher as a class project, though ...