my life

my life

A Poem by fashionchics

My life finally over,
yay for once,
i smiled and loaded,
the gun of my future,
i put it to my head,
but i had an interuppation,
the door opended,
it was my husban looking shocked more than ever,
he told me to put it down i didnt answer,
i only said i was sorry and i love you,
with that i pulled the tiger,
i hit the floor,
my sight blurred,
i couldnt see anything,
but i heard a bullet get fired,
something made a thump on the ground,
i realised it was my husban,
now we could spend,
forever togher with eachother,
without any interuppations.

by jessica freeman

© 2008 fashionchics


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Ha! I laughed out loud when I finished this one. The perspective makes it amusing, even if the topic is quite morbid: a wife killing her husband when she intended to commit suicide.

Thanks for the read!



Posted 16 Years Ago


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Hello there, My Names Jessica, I started writing at the age of elven, i'm now fifteen, and writing is my passion along with art and photography. I only started writing becuase of drama's that happ.. more..

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