I love him but scared

I love him,
but yet he doesnt know,
i dont know how to tell him,
because ive never told a guy,
his the first and only ill probbly say it too,
his the first ive loved and the only i hope,
im scared because i dont no how to tell him,
i hope it goes well,
because his probbly the only one im gonna love like this,
i need to tell him,
but im soo scared,
i gave it a try,
and it worked,
he accepted me,
we are still togher from this day,
i think im soo INLOVE!

Reviews

[Cassandra]

A cute love poem. It is scary when you feel it for the first time those stirrings but its a good kinda scared.
Short and sweet write. Although you might want to go back and make a few grammatical and spelling corrections here..

Probbly-- should be probably.
Your his (his the first and only ..) -- should be He's
I don't (no) how to tell him... should be I don't "know" how to tell him
togher -- together.

Sorry for the corrections, but is a bad pet peeve of mine and I didn't want your words hurt by stupid rules of English. But anyhoo I thought this cute and totally reminded me of being 16. Thanks for that!

[FrikinFrancesca]

This poem is cute! I think telling a guy how you feel is always scary at first. ^^ May be short but it shore does tell alot! ^^ Good job!