I see

I see

A Poem by fashionchics

I see you hold,
your knew girl,
you give her your jacket,
because she was cold,
i walk out the room,
followed by you,
you pin me against the wall,
your holding me so tight,
i can hardly breathe,
you let go of me,
but replace it with a kiss,
i cried on your sholder,
asked the same question over n over again,
why did you leave me why??,
i didnt get an answer back,
i just fell to the floor,
blood going everywhere,
my eyes started to shut,
i just realised you had stabbed me,
i didnt feel any pain,
i just saw u kneeling over,
taking my hand,
saying how sorry you were and how much you love me,
that was all that i heard,
not knowing anything else.

by jessica freeman
 

© 2008 fashionchics


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are you sure you are just 12 lol jk
that was a really emotional poem lol but i loved it
it showed a lot of good emotons keep it up you are really good

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Hello there, My Names Jessica, I started writing at the age of elven, i'm now fifteen, and writing is my passion along with art and photography. I only started writing becuase of drama's that happ.. more..

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