The concept of life.

This isn't really a poem, but it's not really a story

What is the concept of life? I get asked this question quiet a lot.

I always replied with “i don’t know” or “i don’t think there is one”.

I’ve finally worked out for myself what the meaning of life is.

It’s the care for people you have, the love for people you have.

As well as bringing your own bundle of joy into the world and watching them learn and grow up.

I’m happy, I’ve finally found out what it is, I’m happy i have learnt that I’ve got something to live for, something to pray for and someone to look after besides myself.

i always put other people first before myself, but now i only put one person in front of myself, and that is my little boy. That is my concept of life, which is my meaning for life.

I’m glad that it is, because i would not have it any other way, it’s such a delight to watch something so small and fragile, to someone that is learning and growing and that relays on you.

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Make sure you check your spelling and grammar. That being said, I do like the concept of this piece. I think you've hit on something and the degree of yearning and passion present here obviously comes straight from your heart. One thing you need to make sure you keep in mind is where you're going with your works - this piece seems to meander about a bit before getting to the point, and while that's a perfectly valid style, it doesn't really make much sense to do it here. Still, asides from those quibbles, this is still a very solid piece of work. Well done.

[fashionchics]

thanks

[fashionchics]

Thankyou,
I had stopped writing for quiet a long time, i did this for an assignment as it had to be something about myself.