love flied like a dove!

Want to tear off your hair? You were cheated again and again. Than take a look to my poem

When the mosquitoes kisses you, it sucks your blood

When the rain misses the ground it causes  flood

I should've known that fire can never love ice

Its impossible! cats can never marry mice

Love I knew was blind

Love I just can't find

My lips can't take the weight of a smile

My figures tremble because of your number which I can't dial

You fed fake sugar to my smile, making it fat

I spent years making a house of card on which you sat

Your hug was like a hot cup of tea

Now I want to pour it on your head and say "Ya, that's the real me"

You knew you were cheating on me and your lips spoke all lies

You decided to accept my proposal just by throwing a dice

Now you want all your kisses back?

But I'll give you what you lack

A tight slap........

Author's Note

reviews please

Reviews

[Border]

One of the best poems i have read on failed love, that brings out female empowerment.
Females are soft when the man behaves properly but would take on the avatar of "Goddess Kali/Durga " to make sure that the cheaters life is made miserable.
If you have not heard of Kali or Durga, please Google it and you would be amazed about the female power Shakti that is revered by the Hindus of India.
Very nice ending.
If the poem was autobiographical, kindly give the two timing slimy ball one more SLAP and also a KICK, though it would not rhyme with "back" and "lack"
Keep up your good writing and continue spreading joy.

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

Thank you so much. I appreciate that you liked it and I goggled about Durga.

[Gregory Stires]

This is a very god poem that portrays the strong emotions you feel into the poem, I love that when I read this the emotion you put into this poem speaks loud and clear. I think this is one of the best poem about the subject of fallen love.and I love the end where you say you'll gives him something he lacks and give him a slap which he very much deserves, also I love how the poems shows us how you feel and the hurt you felt.

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much... its been a while I've written a poem and your comment surely inspired me

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I will have to agree with Richard a slap in the face poem.


and letting out your angry and pain lot of
Powerful emotions in the piece nice work!



Love I knew was blind

Love I just can't find




My lips can't take the weight of a smile

My figures tremble because of your number which I can't dial

You fed fake sugar to my smile, making it fat





Blessings. Benita

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. :)

[R Smith]

that's a real slap in the face poem, just saying it right out there no holding back, the flow was hectic and the rhyme's exactly right, a really good rollercoaster ride, thank you Scarlet, great writing :)

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much!

[DACAC]

This poem left me speechless, in such a good way! This poem was amazing!

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much!

[Kuldeep desai]

oh my god.....i think this one is the first anger poem i have ever read and you have expressed your anger very well...........Well done Miss.Angry bird......

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much!!

[Bella]

I love this poem good job on it!!!

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much

[Sanjh]

Great, I liked the last verse the most. you might want to change the line " My figures tremble because of your number which I can't dial". It's not fitting in.

Thanks for sharing...:)

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

A very enjoyable poem. Thank you for sharing...:)..............

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Very strong first stanza. Betrayed, it's a strong feeling that sometimes results in a poem. This is a good one. Keep writing.

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much