This is life

I felt the glass is half empty and now its time to fill it up

Tears are never fake 

They always comes out for someone's sake

Smiles are really rare

It appears when everything is fare

Sadness can sometimes be hidden

But crying should never be forbidden

Forcing laughter can be easy

But how can you hush your heart and keep it busy

Thoughts can be stopped by saying "No more!"

Memories breaks all the door

Pain can be concealed

But scar can not be healed

Trying to sleep while your heart tries to blow 

That is the toughest thing I know

Life is not a popularity test

So don't pretend, just do your best

You don't need to look perfect all the time

You think you have no talent? close your eyes and try to write a rhyme

You make mistakes for learning

Keep the pictures of your mistakes, no use of burning

Time cannot be stopped by not looking at the clock

If you have a coveted goal, I promise there will be no block

After every storm comes a rainbow, dear

You don't know how many days you will be alive, so don't keep any fear

Author's Note

please give reviews

Reviews

[DACAC]

I really love this piece.
The only thing that turns me away from any piece is grammar. I'm not one of those grammar nuts, but if it affects the reading, then it, for a lack of a better word, bothers me. Most of it was subject-verb agreement, just keep an eye out for it!

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you. I'll take care of it

[hanir]

This is life indeed! 😊
Nice write! 😊

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Amazing thought with a really ''funny attire '' n u have a gud taste in mixing rhythm, well done !

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much, it means a lot

[Sanjh]

This is one of your best Scarlet. Choice of words is good, and it is expressing a lot than what's actually written.
well done...:)

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank yo soo much!

[Laura Lynn]

To not keep any fear is something I need to figure out. You have given me or us much to ponder in here. I also want to think of any time one should not cry. I always thought crying was good, but why is there mystique about people not crying, when a person thinks they need to hide something for some reason, or is it self control, I need to be waiting and watching in life to figure it out

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

I wrote 'crying should never be forbidden' and I mean to say crying is a good thing. It unloads a lot of burden from our mind with every tear we shed. thank you!

[Kenneth Nicholas Lowe]

Beautiful message, form and rhyme... My only critique might be that... Some lines could be more concise...

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much!

[Sindu]

Everything happens for a reason. But many do not have the paitence for the reason.. This is nice work here scarlet..

You make mistakes for learning
Keep the pictures of your mistakes, no use of burning

very true.. Very hard.. but true

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much1

[JD Jessop]

This is great! I think in one line you meant to say Memories Break all the doors.

Pain can be concealed, scars cannot be healed. Good stuff!!

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much1

[Haley Wilson]

This is a really accurate depiction of life in my opinion. You're a fabulous writer, dear!

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

thank you so much! I appreciate you liked it.

[Deepika]

Great work..cheers!
small mistake, line four it's supposedly *everything's fair.
Thanks for sharing.

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

'everything's and everything is' is the same thing.. thank you so much!