Stars

Cinquain poem about the stars.

 

Stars

by Renia Alessandra Cipriani

 

Stars

 

Shimmering Pale

 

Beams of Brilliance

 

Glowing Orbs of Gas

Stella

 

©2009 FarfallaXEtereo(Renia Alessandra Cipriani)

 

Author's Note

I know it's not the best, but I was bored and wanted to write a poem using the Cinquain format. Mind you, it's 3am.... Hope you like, though. :)

Reviews

[nora]

god, this is really beautiful! you described simple things like stars with such, like, grace or something that the imagery was fantastic! it reminds me of sneaking out at night just to look at the skyy :)
my favorite line was 'beams of brilliance' because i could totally picture the burst of light from the stars. plus, i like the alliteration ;D
this is a really pretty write, renia. keep it upp!
oh, and thanks for the review on my writing :D

[Ophelia]

I really like this. It's short, but expresses a lot in just a few words. It leaves you thinking about those sparkling orbs. It reminds me of the beginning of "Across The Sky" by Emilie Autumn. I'm not sure if you've heard of her. But anyhoo, lovely job! No matter how short it is.

[EmiLie Storie]

ooo I likes it :D
makes me wish it were night already x_x