a strange dream

it's a short poem

I saw you 

in the deadly dark 

you were sad

you were so mad

i told you to cheer up

you told me that you lost the map

that you got away from the right path

that you couldn't get it back 

and now you are stuck 

in the dark

and you don't know how to get out

it was a dream

it was a strange dream

and all that you could hear is your scream

begging for your life

it's like someone try to take it from you

but all that you could wonder is who?

Now you're waking up from your sleep

while you're saying;

what a strange dream ! 

Reviews

[Stars and Whales]

Thank you for sharing! This was excellent! A great read, and I really appreciate you sharing this with me because I loved it! Have a great day, and please keep writing, never give up.

[Dak]

dream's are a crazy thing. sometimes they spark hope. sometimes they inspire. sometimes they need to scare you so bad that youll get up an do something about it. great poem

-Dak

[far_ah]

oww thank you so much , i really appreciate it