I'm me but who are you?

I know who i am. Im derek me myself... im not you, so stop trying to make it so

I like to ride my bored in the wind, play my rock on my guitar, listen to my music,

my music my stuff my feelings, i hate your mind control, its not fair but in the end

i will win over you, your weak minded self and mind controling selfish basterd ways.

I will not let you take away me, my soul is mine and mine alone untill I find the right one

the right person that loves me for me not for what i can do. You annoy me now so go away,

go find yourself, find who you are and leave me out of it, dont come crawling back to me

I am a ghost to you now nothing more, so you need to ask yourself who am I??

Author's Note

Just a starter poem right now there will be more and better ones to come

Reviews

[UponATyme]

Pretty good start! There are a few grammar issues, capitalization, punctuation and whatnot, but nothing the can't be fixed. Make sure you read over your pieces before you go showing them off. You want them to be the best they can be, don't you? Be proud of your work! Edit!

Love the ideas you're portraying, really great. Keep up the good work!

[deeps]

Wow! I like your starter on this. Wonderful
you say what you needed to say. Straight to the point.
Well expressed.