Blood Bond

Blood Bond

A Poem by fantasylover13
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I'm so sad and upset that it's hard to explain i just can't believe this

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 I hate this part of me

I hate it so much

For this part that can never be removed

Stains and poisons me inside and out

This part of me lives all around me

For it is inside of me 

It controls half of my mind and half of my body

This part can never be removed

And no matter how much I wish it could be

It will never be removed

Now when ever I speak to the part that controls me

When ever I talk or speak my thoughts I get beat down

I get yelled at, I got beaten, and who knows what else

And now when I lay on the floor bleeding my tainted blood out

I remember the man who gave me this poisoned blood

I remember my blood bond 

I remember my father

© 2009 fantasylover13


Author's Note

fantasylover13
ignore the grammer and please rate and comment

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Child abuse in some sort.
A betrayal by your father.
Making you bleed.
Though the blood you bleed is also his.
Its sickening. The circumstances that is.
I have been through this with my father.
So I can understand that.
Nice writing.
Worth the read at least for me.

Posted 15 Years Ago


i liked your style in writing

but try to make it more rythemtic, do you know what i mean?!

but good job anyway :D:D

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on July 18, 2009

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fantasylover13
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