So Long and Goodnight

Well i love the song helena from mcr so i took a lil part of there lyrics along with whispers in the dark

Whispers echo through the dark

Some say forward some say backwards

The whispers turn to sobs and others turn to cheers

I hear one say, "Come back to me. . ."

I hear another say, "Come to me. . ."

I walk forward to a light that shines so bright

The sobs get louder but they cheers go along with it

I keep walking and now one says, "So long and goodnight"

Light appears around me as I am in a better place then before

I feel no pain I feel no sadness I feel nothing bitter

Cheers go around a golden room but now I feel like I lost something. . . 

And now I see what the whispers in the dark where telling me

One was saying come back to life 

Another saying go to death

And now as the last words of life were so long and good night. . . 

 

 

 

 

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[kewlbluetiger]

Wow it's amazing how music can move us to write some really beautiful works. This is a great example. I love the faithfulness in a few spots like here:
"Light appears around me as I am in a better place then before
I feel no pain I feel no sadness I feel nothing bitter
Cheers go around a golden room but now I feel like I lost something. . . "

Your writing is too strong for so many ". . .'s" don't kill your work with over punctualization. (This is just a peeve of mine). The sobs and cheers imagery are very interesting. I loved it!