To Him

Melting inside,

I think of you,

my heart feels whole,

I feel brand new.

I hear your heart,

become your soul,

Devour me,

I've no control.

If this is love,

perfect bliss,

Give me your all,

sealed with a kiss.

Hold me closely,

forever secure,

look into my eyes,

the ones I adore.

Saved from lonely,

I am in your debt,

I love you always,

so don't you forget...

 

 

Reviews

[Kelley]

That rhyme at the end was perfect Natasha. This was sweet and he must of been
a special guy......smiles

Great write!

Kelley

[Isolophobe]

I really like how each line is concise, containing a feeling or sentiment deeper than the few words you describe it with, and you keep that the whole poem without forcing it.