Words of a Broken Heart

Frustration,

Chaos,

Heartache,

Tears,

Loving,

Losing,

Pain,

Fear,

Memories,

Fading,

Passion,

Lost,

Leaving,

Sadness,

Justice,

Cause,

Eternal,

Lonesome,

Forgotten,

Gone,

Dejected,

Imprisoned,

Broken,

Done.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Andrew Tyler McCown]

This poem is powerful and fun. The flow is great. I really enjoyed reading it.
But - "justice" strikes me as out of place. I like what Timothy Smiley did and pulled the first letters, I know that this idea is a little cheezy, but it would be cool if the first letters made a seperate word. but only do it if you can keep the flow. Don't try to force anything.

[Timothy Starship]

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