No More

Love is forever,

Love is a heart,

Love is together,

And never apart.

Love is a feeling,

Love is a soul,

Love is appealing,

But out of control.

Love is pure heartache,

Love is a chore,

And this is why I,

Just don't love anymore...

Reviews

[Andrew Tyler McCown]

You can do better. I'm glad that you wrote this because its good to get your emotions out on "paper" but right now the simplicity lacks originality or real humor. Do you read Dorothy Parker at all? I really think you would connect with both the style and content of her poetry.